Tuesday, October 3, 2006


serenity can't b defned..!!

11 comments:

Kooldude said...

I just can't get the meaning of the title.
I mean the lady in the pic does not even has a trace of serenity.Not even in her eyes.
The pic is not in the right proportion....
Anyways,
Always remember:
There's alwayz scope 4 improvement.....!!!!

Ayushi said...

being not a conneusiour in this field, i might not be able to evaluate this sketch well....but through the eyes...i must say...the eyes you make depict a lot...the previous comments might be of someone who knows well...but lookin thru the eyes of a layman....i think this one is a beautiful sketch worth having a look at and appreciating....hope we get to see more of such stuff in the future....

Anika said...

Hey...
gr8 stuff yaar....though m not an artist myself but the pictures looks awesome.

Nimisha said...

Hey cool yaar very good attempt.
as other comments says you always have a chance to improve but this one is GREAT

Vivek said...

I accept kooldude words-
'Title not sync with picture'

Being a friend to AJ and commenting on her arts from last few months, I think i have gain knowledge as well as interest in this field.

I comment this time as +ve & -ve .

+ve:-
1. Background and theme selected uniquely.
2.Very close to real life scenario.

-ve:-
1.The stomach area is given more % ratio in comparision to girls Height. This makes it little distraught and the pic that should be little bend make it inclined to 80Degree.

2.A better Title would near to where 'pains/grief hidden under eyes and lips'.

I dont know where i count this pic. Not sure how good i have calculated,but i am sure AJ is capable of producing much and more better beauties to us.

Good Luck for Future.
Vivek

Aparna said...

Hii all i am overwhelmed with ur reponses....i am really thank full to both kooldude vivek n others for tellin me where i am wrong n where i can improve ....THANK U so much
I 'll make it sure in the future that i do much better than this n try to match up to all ur expectations....!!!

raghu said...

Hey, aparana, this is a nice sketch. u maintained to show the light comming from window.

Damanpreet singh said...

great job!!

Prateek Mangal said...

gr8 work buddy. it is really admirable, keep it up , and wish u a very bright future

Anonymous said...

It's been long time you have produce something new on this platform.

Vivek Jain

ruchi said...

What else should i say!!!!!!!!!!!!!!